22 Jul

Revisions

I just took this exchange out of my novel in progress. It makes me snicker, but it doesn’t have a place in moving the plot along.

“Miko, who sedated you yesterday.”
“An unorthodox management technique,” Glas said. “Please don’t try it.”
“I certainly won’t.”

You have to be willing to kill your babies, they say, but I can’t let it go entirely unacknowledged, hence posting it here.